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Cire for seijikat by *kibblz:iconkibblz:

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My artwork is not stock! They are mine and only mine!!! Do NOT repost, redistribute, use, copy, trace, ect... MY artwork!!! Art in this gallery is © to Cheryl Bundy (kibblz). All rights reserved. Do not use, copy or alter without proper permission.
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Yay Cire~! I could so see him sitting at a bar being a flirt (I hope I got his personality right ^_^;;; ).

Cire belongs to :iconseijikat: Hope you like it~! I am sorry that it took so long~!

From start to finish this took me about 1.5 - 2 hours. I still feel like that I can improve, so look forward to it~!

Artework © *kibblz
Character (Cire) © =seijikat

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*mangameow May 14, 2009, 8:43:33 AM
I'd kinda like a higher resolution of this... it feels a tad small... Hard to see. OnO;
It's a little blurry.... :c
Hard to see the details...
But, uhm... I like the face shape~
This time it's really great~<3
Try rounding the chin a tiny tiny bit, and the jawline too... ^^
But you gave her a bit of a giraffe neck. x3;
I'm not sure if necks can bend quite like that... I think they can, but I can't imagine it being terribly comfortable. ^^; *tries to move neck like that* Yep, it's possible...... Painfulish, but possible. x3;
Anyways~
She seems a bit 'flat', if you know what I mean. :3
The details are great~
Uhm... you seem to be missing those clothing creases I love so much in this one... ;n; I'm saaad!!! *fetal position*
Anyways, I'm just wondering... did you use a thicker pencil for this than you usually do~?
The cup/glass thing (I'm so good with fine dining ware or whatever it's called, aren't I~? xD ) feel a little... uhm... ick. Idk, it just doesn't look quite right.
The hand is really great though~! >w<
Maybe add some fingernails~? (I ususally don't have quite enough space to add fingernails, but this seems like a large enough hand [very proportional too] to be able to add them. Just a thought~
You don't have to~
Anyways~
As always I really really love the eyes~
You have such an attractive style when it come to them~
You just need a bit of fine tuning on this one~
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~Steff-Steff May 10, 2009, 8:27:06 PM
This one is a very good one. Your style is unique and you should keep it like that style, Never seen one like that. To bad the picture isn't bigger that's the only annoying part about it >,<

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*kibblz May 11, 2009, 7:57:08 AM
Thank you~! :] I am curious what my drawings would look like if I colored them on the computer? o-o I need to buy a tablet >_< I am keeping them small for security 8Db

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~Steff-Steff May 11, 2009, 1:57:01 PM
Well I did it by mouse for years, a lot of years, and I seemed to be pretty good for a while, I mean look at my New Years 2008 girl with green eyes that's naked under the full moon. I did her completely in mouse and a crappy mouse at that.

Well keeping it small makes the viewers appreciate it less as in they don't really look at it. They glimpse and squint then move on cus they can't see it properly. I mean I looked at it then was like, Meh, can't look at it anymore and went on. I could see that it was interesting but it's to small a 600X600 or a 600X800 are a viewers best choice. You already have two water marks on it plus a signature I think you can make the viewers a little more excited if you actually show off your art instead of hide it. It's like you might as well not even put your art up if your too scared. I see a lot of pro's making them the right size and putting water marks or signatures on them and having no problems. I haven't had problems cus I ain't good enough either you also got to take that into consideration.

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*kibblz May 11, 2009, 6:31:35 PM
I can't sit at a computer for hours though, other wise I would be coloring by mouse ^_^;;;

I may change the sizes in the future, depends...

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